Bipolar pitch

Are there any areas of the presentation that you would like to give any more detail on ?
If I was to give more detail on any part of my presentation I would choose to give more detail on my planning schedule, my idea, my equipment and my creative concept. I would give more detail on my planning schedule because I could of spoke more about what days I was filming, which location I was going to filming and what date it would be on because I didn't mention it in the presentation but the dates I was going to film. for example if  I was to say more about my locations I was going to film on I would of said that the first location that I would start filming is the streets of Brims down road. I would of also said that I would start filming on the 15th of February till the end the deadline on the 20th of February.

Another area of my present that I would add more detail on the equipment because even if I didn't have to say it in the presentation I would of said the reasons why I would use my equipment for example the reason why I would use a camera is because without the camera I can't film. Another thing that I would of added in the presentation is a camera charger because if my camera man was to be filming me in a location (for example on Brimsdown road) and the camera ran out of battery then I wouldn't be able to film anything because I wouldn't have the charger with me. The last thing I would give more detail on is the creative concept because if I was to change anything I would changed amplifying to interpretative because if I was to film a location for (example the doctor Escrobar scene) it would be matching the mood of the song because if I was to use amplifying it would match because the lyrics would be matching some of the actions in the video.





What did your audience identify as the strengths of your music video idea ?
The strengths that the audience gave me was the questions on my locations from my idea of the music video because I knew what I was going to use in my locations and what locations I was going to use in my music video. For example when someone asked me how my music video going to end it gave my a idea because after seeing the music video 'Stan' by Eminem I thought after Dr Escrobar comes back from somewhere he can find that Kaleb has hung himself.
Another strength that the audience gave me would of been when one of then asked me how I came up with my idea was and how it was going to start briefly. I knew what type of idea I was going to use in the beginning of video and how it was going to plan out it starts. For example when Klhio is lip-syncing the first verse he's sadly walking down the streets of Brimsdown road. This proves Goodwin's theory on what a contradicting video is. For example if he was to actually see double while the lyrics are saying 'and now I'm seeing double' it would an interpretive video.The last advantage that the audience gave me as a strength would of have to of been the part when one of the members of the audience asked why the artist was to wear white contact lenses. I saw this as a strength because it was part of my idea of the story for when Klhio turns into the monster later in the story


What did your audience identify as the areas for improvement ?
The areas of my Q and A that I would improve on is that I would think over more my answers more because when some of the members of the audience asked me some of the questions I didn't know how to answer some of them because they were to answer. For example when they asked me about the character's eye color and the his costume I couldn't deliver my answer to the question because I thought it would of made more sense if only his eye color changed instead of his clothing. This could be not just an area of my idea that I could work on and think over but also something that could be used for an improvement. Another area I thought that could use improvement was when one of the members of the audience asked me what going to appeal more to a boy than a girl because I couldn't answer it in proper detail. I thought that would of needed an improvement because the way I see it after hearing the lyrics and due to song being about bipolar I thought it would more targeted towards male than female. Plus I don't see a problem why a female audience can't listen to a song targeted towards males. The final thing that I would add more improvement would be the type of styles of lip-syncing because I didn't know I was supposed to imitate a famous artist that lip syncs (for example 50 cent).


What would you change if you were to make this again ?
If I was to make this music video again then I wouldn't change a thing because I like my idea exactly the way it is. Another reason why I didn't want to change anything is because when I was planing it I thought it would perfect for the music video because some of the lyrics match with some of the scenes of the  different locations I'm going to have in the music video for example when Kaleb goes to see Dr Escrobar in the song 'Bipolar' it goes with the hospital scene that I am going to use in the music video where the scene shows Dr Escrobar talking to Kaleb in the perspective of lip-syncing the lyrics of the song. This would of been an Interpretive scene of the video because it would of been matching the actions of it which would of been proving Goodwin's theory on what a contradicting video is. The only thing I would change is the part where Dr Escrobar says 'I'm trapped in psychological prison' because when I heard it in the song 'Bipolar' I didn't know what location to use for the video when heard it. However if I was to use a location I would of use a green screen of a prison bar type of background while lip-syncing the third verse in the music video.